Sometimes my poems emerge from a phrase, a line or a stanza that invites itself into my consciousness; other times they arise from an image - usually one emotional or at least intriguing - in my mind. But sometimes, both: the first stanza of this piece blossomed in my mind one day in a matter of minutes, but the image of a broken, tired man in the rain developed with the poem. What inspires your works?
the silent storm
safely shackled
sandals torn
flinches at
the hint of rain
burning tears
streaks of pain
molten shades
and burning dark
lashes broke
your quiet heart
lying still
the cruel claws
tearing through
your carrion flaws
distant thunder
quiet rain
wash away
the years of pain
Also shared at WWP #91. More poems.





Lovely poem, but even quiet rain gets us wet!
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you again, Sam. This has lots of molten sadness.
ReplyDeleteNice work, Sam.
ReplyDeletePamela
good one!
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